I have waited all this time for you
Believed all your promises were true
I keep believing that you mean what you say
wont you be my tomorrow now tomorrow's today
I am so tired and blue
And I just can't wait around for you
I am so tired and blue
And I always thought we'd see it through
And I stop and sit and wonder why
You dont sleep here tonight
I stayed at home remaining true
While you do what you want to do.
2007-03-21 05:55:47 · 21 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Very profoud!
2007-03-21 06:34:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was pretty cool. I actually expected some suck-*** poem (being Yahoo and all) but I liked yours.
Cheers!
2007-03-21 12:58:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow, you could write lyrics for Hilary Duff!
What an expansive vocabulary you use! No cliches at all!
2007-03-21 13:00:17 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Deep! Really interesting. Do keep writing..
2007-03-21 13:00:14 · answer #4 · answered by LibraCrazyVirgo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes.
2007-03-21 12:58:09 · answer #5 · answered by St♥rmy Skye 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Too much like a limerick...you know, there once was a man from Nantucket. Try not to rhyme every line.
2007-03-21 12:59:19 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Yes, that's a nice (but sad) poem and I can relate.
2007-03-21 13:01:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! It's so romantic! Keep it up- you should win a prize or something! =)
2007-03-21 13:00:03 · answer #8 · answered by Lefty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well dude or dudet..im jst being honest...its good but it need a little ajustment like the last line....~~~~~u goota chnge it...hope i helped
2007-03-21 12:58:42 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
they all couplets - try some more poetic devices, actually i may be a little too hard, i'm studdying poety at the moment - Seamus Heaney.
2007-03-21 12:58:20 · answer #10 · answered by john c 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋