Both wordings are complex and convoluted.
I would opt for something more like this:
"The required information is provided below."
2007-03-20 20:45:23
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answer #1
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answered by gb_nina 3
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I think the first one says the information is actually below. Its in an attached document.
The second one says to me that the directions to find the information are typed below. So the attached document contains references to the necessary information, not the information itself.
2007-03-21 08:39:53
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answered by hottotrot1_usa 7
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The first is correct if the information is actually given "below."
The second is correct if the information itself is not given "below" but directions on how to find the information is.
2007-03-21 10:29:56
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answered by Anonymous
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Neither is correct english, both are abbreviated phrases, abbreviated to save the reader effort, space and time.
"please find required information below" is better because shorter, more concise, more efficient.
2007-03-21 04:23:10
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answer #4
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answered by Rynbow 2
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1. There is other options to you, if you are satisfied you can take it or leave it.
2. You have no other options, other than what "shown below".
2007-03-21 03:46:54
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answer #5
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answered by manjunath_empeetech 6
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Both really none of those are wrong in the strictest sense but I would opt for 'please find required information below'
2007-03-21 09:12:44
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answered by kissaled 5
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Please find required information as shown below is correct English.~~
2007-03-21 03:49:47
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answered by burning brightly 7
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"The required information can be found below for your convenience." would sound more pleasant.
It's not just about grammatically sound sentences, but also the "tone" of your words.
2007-03-21 04:03:40
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answered by ? 2
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The first one is more apt.
In the second one "as shown ' is redundant.
2007-03-21 06:02:56
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answered by NQS 5
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I feel the first one is correct.
2007-03-21 09:34:14
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answered by soro712 2
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