My personal Demons
Deep down inside me this a dark thing that wants to break free. It has it grasp over
over me it makes me feel like life is'nt worth it all. Like death is the way out.I try
to fight it but its taking over.It's making me hurt my self and people around me.
It wants blood it needs a life.It's going to be the end of me the end of my life.I
could feel it i could feel its plan .It plans to drive me crazy it plans to take me
over. It plan's destroy all that i have all that i love .I know how to end it tring to
hurting other peole . The only way is having to end me. It's the only way to stop the pain
that it would make me cause
2007-03-19 23:46:52 · 8 answers · asked by bik_ko 3 in Health ➔ Mental Health
it is awsome reminds me of myself!
Love the title of ur poem ,but if u checked it back againg i mean the poem u can make it even stronger,good luck with that!
try this link...
http://www.writing.com
2007-03-20 00:41:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is very disturbing to me, and I pray that you get some help to overcome that which is bothering you and torturting you...you have talent, and it is a shame that you are wasting it feeling low and disgusting, these words could almost be used in a rock and roll song...I do think it is good that you are expressing yourself, but brother, please pray to God and through Jesus, to lift your spirits and bring you up out of this darkness you are experiencing...with the Lord, you will learn that you are loved, and that nothing is beyond repair in your life...God bless little one, and don't waste that talent, please?...
2007-03-20 08:27:15 · answer #2 · answered by MotherKittyKat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG!!! i LUV u'r poem! I write some poetry myself. It is an amazing poem... although if you feel that way, you should talk to someone. I have depression issues as well, and talking to someone helps. Other than that, your poem is really good! :)
2007-03-20 14:21:43 · answer #3 · answered by Isabelle Lightwood 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is this just a poem or is this also how you are feeling? how about writing another poem,this time a positive one. call it,'my personal angel'. write about the light that is also inside you, wright about the strength that is within, write about how light is more powerful than darkness. think it, write it,believe it,live it.
2007-03-20 09:23:52 · answer #4 · answered by aussiejoeanne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's crap. Grow up. Get a job and do something productive. Quit writing gay crap like this. Good Lord! Quit bein such a lazy-@ss and get a job. You need to stop writing crap like this down and then putting it on here. It's beyond gay, bub. Have they even dropped yet?
2007-03-20 07:47:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It sounds like Depression, if this is really how you feel. Medications or drugs can make you feel like this. Sounds like you need some help. You need a prayer.
2007-03-20 06:55:21 · answer #6 · answered by kiki 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Scarey poem, if that's how you are really thinking. If you are thinking that way, get to a doctor right away!
2007-03-20 06:56:00 · answer #7 · answered by Mary G 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont do poems
2007-03-20 07:13:15 · answer #8 · answered by sephiroth 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋