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opinions would be good to, it is for a fairy obsesed 5 year old called antigone.
A ntigone is a fairy without wings
N ot of earth or of heaven this angel sings
T hrough love she blossoms more each day
I ntensly searching to find new ways
G enerosity far beyond compare
O open her heart and you will see her face there
N ever asking of much, just kindness and hope
E ... this is where i need your help

2007-03-19 13:24:59 · 12 answers · asked by bambi01984 1 in Education & Reference Quotations

i also need to do one for a 3year old boy, ATTICUS and a 7 year old boy Oscar if you want to give any help to those

2007-03-19 13:44:00 · update #1

if anyone else thinks the O line makes her sound self obsessed, maybe i need some help there to. great answers people. keep it up

2007-03-19 13:47:59 · update #2

12 answers

change N to 'N ever asking of much, just kindness and love' and then E can be 'E vermore her inner beauty shines like a dove'

2007-03-19 14:25:02 · answer #1 · answered by ZoeGirl 1 · 1 0

O open her heart and find goodness there
N eath flowers below,and skies up above
Everything blessing -this fairy of love.

2007-03-19 16:29:57 · answer #2 · answered by my 2 cents 4 · 1 0

Every day there she is
or
Everytime i can see
or
Embracing her love to you
or
Evolving in ur heart.
or
Engaging in your life.

2007-03-19 14:41:50 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

Ever looking for knowledge, she doesn't mope.

Everyone thinks she should be the next pope.

Even on her own, she knows how to cope.

Eating up all her veggies and wearing her coat.

2007-03-19 13:42:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

Ever faithful; bring her there.(I don't exacly like the 'bring her there' part but that was all I could think of. Sorry:(
I like the poem. Very imaginable and creative.

2007-03-19 13:32:42 · answer #5 · answered by miss pochacco 3 · 1 0

Eternally fated to do nothing but mope
Every day trying, just trying to cope
Explain to her your problems, and she'll help you cope
Ever is Antigone selfish...nope

2007-03-19 13:32:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Embracing the world and every flower she gropes.

2007-03-19 13:34:40 · answer #7 · answered by Isabella's Mommy Expecting #2 6 · 1 0

Why would her face be in her heart ? wouldn't that make her self obsessed

2007-03-19 13:31:21 · answer #8 · answered by madamspud 4 · 1 0

I like the verb "escapes" for the E. Or "embraces."

2007-03-19 13:28:33 · answer #9 · answered by frogdog06 2 · 1 0

empathetic... to a fault


take the "o" off of "open" for uniformity

2007-03-19 13:31:48 · answer #10 · answered by ©2009 7 · 1 0

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