could you please check the text for any mistakes
Thanks
Middle and High school students were talking about German and International commercials in television.
We learned how televison has been used as a vehicle for advertising.Television commercials have become the most effective, most pervasive, and most popular method of selling products of all sorts.
During class we watched some commercials and later we compared new and old stlyes of advertising the same product.It was a different way of using the German language, personal appearance and different way of behaving or approaching a situation that is characteristic for the product.
2007-03-19 06:03:12 · 5 answers · asked by Cess 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Middle and High school students were talking about German and International commercials in television.
We learned how televison has been used as a vehicle for advertising.Television commercials have become the most effective, most PURSUASIVE(not pervasive), and most popular method of selling products of all sorts.
During class we watched some commercials and later we compared new and old stlyes(STYLES (sp)) of advertising the same product.(two spaces after period) It was a different way of using the German language, personal appearance and (a) different way of approaching a situation that characterizes the product (leave behaving out of this sentence - you cant "behave" a situation, you can approach one however).
Hope this helps
2007-03-19 06:17:03 · answer #1 · answered by cappy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Middle and High school students were ( CONVERSING) about German and International commercials (ON )television.
We learned how televison ( TELEVISION ) ( HAD ) been used as a vehicle for advertising.Television commercials have become the most effective, most ( PERSUASIVE ), and most popular method of selling products of all sorts.
During class we watched some commercials and later we compared new and old ( STYLES )of advertising the same product.It was a different way of using the German language, personal appearance and ( A )different way of approaching a situation that ( WAS) characteristic for the product.
2007-03-19 06:41:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would change the first line to read 'commercials ON television', and I would also cleanup the last sentence, it is a bit clumsy. Also, you have spelt styles wrong, but otherwise it is good.
2007-03-19 06:22:52 · answer #3 · answered by oneblondepilgrim 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only error I see is the word "styles" I think that may just be a typo, and there should always be 2 spaces after a period.
2007-03-19 06:12:17 · answer #4 · answered by ♪ ♫Jin_Jur♫ ♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Looks ok to me..
2007-03-19 06:09:04 · answer #5 · answered by dwh12345 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋