Read between lines, discover the rhyme
it is worth all the dedicated time.
Whatever you are - friends or foes
forget everything and read the poem, here it goes :
Originality is the only thing to be boasted
after all, what do you give the world,
if you copy things which were already posted.
You ought to be a lil twisted and curled,
and originality, in your creations, needs to be unfurled.
I don't know how are my creations
But i do know, they are neither duplicate nor fake,
The only thing i feel good about in my dedications
is originality, my only piece of cake.
You don't need to be creative, see,
You don't need to be good
but the only need is that like me,
show your originality you should.
It doesn't matter you are weak,
or you are a bit of stout,
you needn't in your field be at the peak,
ORIGINALITY IS THE ONLY THING TO BOAST ABOUT.
2007-03-18 20:56:45 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Tell me how was that, men and women,
by rating it on a scale of one through ten.
Also, if you have an original creation like a poem,
forget everything, just post 'em.
2007-03-18 20:57:01 · update #1
read my other poems too, in my Q&A
2007-03-18 20:57:30 · update #2
wat? who ABE Lincoln ???
thnx Free ! for giving me 10.
ya, its an original, after all, originality is my only piece of cake,
in order to create original writings, though, u have to put a lot of time on stake.
2007-03-18 22:53:10 · update #3
I love your originality. I like what I think you're saying her. That it doesn't matter if we're not perfect in our lives or who we are, just be who we are, even if it's original.?
I like that alot. 10!
2007-03-20 10:21:06 · answer #1 · answered by Teresa t 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well dear at LEAST you're striving to be ---ORIGINAL, and thats nice and creative, but you should also try a little free prose with not so much emphasis on rhyming!
2007-03-19 04:06:22 · answer #2 · answered by peachiepie 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's reality, Mr. originality!
2007-03-24 05:43:03 · answer #3 · answered by johnny n 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As long as it's original .... you get a 10... for originality, lol
2007-03-19 12:16:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
EXCELLENT!!! Another 10 out of 10. You continue to captivate me with your poems.
2007-03-19 08:35:53 · answer #5 · answered by Scippio of Light 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
10 out of 10. it was really gooood.
2007-03-25 11:06:47 · answer #6 · answered by ana 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good job Prakhar
2007-03-24 09:22:44 · answer #7 · answered by hellopb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It reads well. I'm not much into poetry but I love words. I give you a ............10 :)
2007-03-19 04:03:08 · answer #8 · answered by Praxis 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it baffled me wat is it about
the 1st bit starts of quick and then it slows down.
For originality id give it 6/10.... good effort.
But its doesn't read very well.
2007-03-19 09:09:26 · answer #9 · answered by cinders162002 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if it is original i love it ,good job.
2007-03-19 04:04:57 · answer #10 · answered by 16 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋