The day's just beginning
You see the girl you love
You don't know what to do or say
You're friends, you talk to eachother everyday
On the phone, computer, etc
You're walking with her
Talking, laughing, having the time of your life
The sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you
It's time to say goodbye
You hug and walk off
You're walking, past places where we played as kids
Later you talk to eachother
Time's ending
You say you'll see eachother tomorrow
You know what
You're in goddamn love
Is there anything else better in the world
2007-03-18 11:07:48 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
wow there's alot of voice in it. i write alot of poetry and have had some published. If you really like writing, keep on, I think you have a gift. have anymore??
2007-03-18 11:13:09 · answer #1 · answered by avaughn09 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds more like an IM chat then a poem...
2007-03-18 18:12:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its kick azz mate ! i like it alot
2007-03-18 18:13:22 · answer #3 · answered by phalsephate 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2007-03-18 18:14:28 · answer #4 · answered by alexandria1_1999 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋