Could you check this?

Question

Could you check this text looking for possible errors?

"Me, M Meinelt (Thailand), Spacepioneers-UK operator and responsible, with the ID Card xxxxxxx, I certify that David Rodríguez Hernández (Spain), with the ID Card xxxxxxx has carried out the translation from English into Spanish of the Masive Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game (MMORPG) called Space Pioneers, developed by Bogatz Medientechnik (Germany).

I declare that the work undertoken has been successfully completed."


Thank's

Answer 1

Could you check this?
Could you check this text looking for possible errors?

"Me, M Meinelt (Thailand), Space pioneers-UK operator and responsible, with the ID Card xxxxxxx, I certify that David Rodríguez Hernández (Spain), with the ID Card xxxxxxx has carried out the translation from English into Spanish of the Massive Multiplayer On line Role-Playing Game (MMORPG) called Space Pioneers, developed by Bogatz Medientechnik (Germany).

I declare that the work undertaken has been successfully completed."

I did a spell check and now it is correct.

Answer 2

Here is what it should look like -

"I, M Meinelt (Thailand), Spacepioneers-UK operator and responsible, with the ID Card xxxxxxx, I certify that David Rodríguez Hernández (Spain), with the ID Card xxxxxxx has carried out the translation from English into Spanish of the Massive Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game (MMORPG) called Space Pioneers, developed by Bogatz Medientechnik (Germany).

I declare that the work undertaken has been successfully completed."

Answer 3

"Me, M Meinelt (Thailand), Spacepioneers-UK operator and responsible, with the ID Card xxxxxxx, I certify that David Rodríguez Hernández (Spain), with the ID Card xxxxxxx has carried out the translation from English into Spanish of the Masive Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game (MMORPG) called Space Pioneers, developed by Bogatz Medientechnik (Germany).

I declare that the work undertoken has been successfully completed."


Thank's

change it to this

"M Meinelt and I (Thailand), Space pioneers-UK operator and responsible, with the ID Card xxxxxxx, I certify that David Rodríguez Hernández (Spain), with the ID Card xxxxxxx has carried out the translation from English into Spanish of the Massive Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game (MMORPG) called Space Pioneers, developed by Bogatz Medientechnik (Germany).

I declare that the work undertaken has been successfully completed."


Thanks

Answer 4

Masive-Massive.

Answer 5

Not sure but the first word I guess shoul be "I" instead of "Me"

Answer 6

Take out the "I" before certify, and change the "me" to "I". Change "undertoken" to "undertaken". Change "masive" to "massive". No apostrophe in thanks.

Answer 7

theres no apostrophy in thanks lol