Life is an opportunity bestowed upon you,
respect it, utilise it and most important, live it.
You never know what may be ahead, so if you feel
someone needs something more than you do, just give it.
Life is not something to be taken very seriously,
after all, who gets out of this world alive ???
You never know when you might be thrown out,
this life is not so different from a beehive.
Even the slightest of disturbances may change everything,
life flows as in the wind, a feather.
And the worst part is, unlike a computer keyboard,
it doesn't allow U & I to be always together.
Original is everything except the U & I part (just the last two lines) and the no one gets out alive (the first two lines of the second stanza), but no lyrics have been copied.
2007-03-18 01:39:59 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
see the lyrics and tell me how they are and also see my other two poems posted recently.
2007-03-18 01:40:56 · update #1
i will post a new short one about originality which i have already written. so check my Q & A soon.
2007-03-18 07:42:42 · update #2
any thing abotu life i like! nice poem.
2007-03-18 01:48:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first stanza is my very favorite, although the entire piece is very well written. I do not, however, agree with the topic of the piece as it finishes. Sorry ... but I think we all have a place in the world and it needs to be taken very seriously and that everything happens for a reason. You learn from mistakes and lost love.
It'll be ok =]
2007-03-25 00:42:09 · answer #2 · answered by Natalie R 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like it. Thinking of printing it? It can make a good start for an article, essay or may be even a novel. I will be sure to read your other poems. Do you participate in poem compititions?
2007-03-18 19:05:41 · answer #3 · answered by Mau 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is like a school, we are the students and "time" is a teacher... thats the point of a life.
so learn alots to enrich ur soul to become a wise person....
( nice poem u had )
2007-03-26 02:27:03 · answer #4 · answered by vio 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah I liked your poem and it seemed correct about the life issues!
2007-03-25 20:02:52 · answer #5 · answered by ravendragonwolf 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is simply amazing. Keep up the excellent work.
2007-03-18 08:50:46 · answer #6 · answered by Scippio of Light 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice is your poem as I say,
keep up your efforts everyday.
2007-03-22 13:04:12 · answer #7 · answered by Riz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not 2 bad
2007-03-18 09:42:56 · answer #8 · answered by are you Mirror? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good
2007-03-18 08:43:28 · answer #9 · answered by khuranapvp 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good one. Keep writing.
2007-03-18 08:47:24 · answer #10 · answered by Smart Indian 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋