So far I have::
The caramel sunset
Glowing upon the white moon
all i need is 1 more line and remember it has to add up to 5 syllables
2007-03-17 13:18:02 · 5 answers · asked by Ivana 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
remeber that it has to be about the sunset!!
2007-03-17 13:25:08 · update #1
heaven to the west
2007-03-17 14:17:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I suggest you remove 'The' from the first line:
Caramel Sunset
Glowing upon the white moon
Announces day's end
or
As day turns to night
or
Sky's colors collide
or
Will soon dissappear
or
Announces the night
or
Brings night's arrival
etc.
2007-03-18 02:21:41 · answer #2 · answered by keengrrl76 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"bathes the day in sweet slumber"
or
"blankets the weary daytime"
note:
-careful: your first line has 6 syllables (because the proper pronounciation is "car-a-mel" instead of "car-mel"); can you think of a 2-syllable colour instead? (I *love* "caramel", but it won't work)
-Jessica's line has 9 syllables instead of 5
-David's line is redundant (what else besides tears would you cry--blood?)
2007-03-17 20:32:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
with trees as pretty as the bright sun
2007-03-17 20:26:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
makes me cry in tears
2007-03-17 20:22:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋