Can U Plz help me with the corrections in these 2 sentences?

Question

This sentence has 8 errors: Johnny Tremain was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures as the american colonies mature Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and cannot no longer work at learning his craft silversmithing

This one has 14: Un-like regular works of fiction historical fiction portray people that actually live and play a role in History John Hancock Sam Adams Paul Revere and James Otis are some of the real life characters that appears in Johnny Tremain



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Answer 1

Johnny Tremain is a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures as the American Colonies mature. Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer work at learning his craft, silversmithing.

Unlike regular works of fiction, historical fiction portrays people that actually lived and played a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real-life characters that appear in Johnny Tremain.

Answer 2

Johnny Tremain IS a historic fictional novel about a boy who matures during the beginning of the American colonies. Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer learn how to be a silversmith.

Unlike regular fictional books, historical fiction portrays people who actually lived and played a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere and James Otis are some of the real life characters who appear in Johnny Tremain.

Actually you should underline the name of the book: Johnny Tremain.

Everyone who is using WAS in the first sentence makes it sound like the book is no longer around and unavailable.

Answer 3

Johnny Tremain (underline) was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures. As the American colonies mature, Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer work at learning his craft, silversmithing.

Unlike regular works of fiction, historical fiction portrays people that actually live and play a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real-life characters that appear in Johnny Tremain(underline).

Answer 4

Johnny Tremain was an historical fiction novel about a boy who matures along with the American colonies. Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer work at learning the craft of silversmithing.

Historical fiction differs from regular works of fiction as historical fiction concerns the lives of people who actually played a role in creating history while regular fiction does not. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real life characters that appear in Johnny Tremain.

Answer 5

Johnny Tremain needs to be underlined, as it is a title of book.
Johnny Tremain is a historical fiction novel about a boy who matures as the American Colonies mature. Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer work at learning his craft; silver-smithing.

This one has 14: Unlike regular works of fiction, historical fiction portrays people who actually live and play a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real life characters that appear in Johnny Tremain. (underline Johnny Tremain again.)

Answer 6

This sentence has 8 errors: Johnny Tremain was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures. As the American colonies mature Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and can no longer work at learning his craft, silver smithing.

This one has 14: Unlike regular works of fiction, historical fiction portrays people that actually lived and played a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real life characters that appeared in Johnny Tremain.

Answer 7

Johnny Tremain was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures as the American colonies mature Johnny faces a crisis when he injures his hand and cannot no longer work at learning his craft silversmith

UN-like regular works of fiction historical fiction portray people that actually live and play a role in History John Hancock Sam Adams Paul Revere and James Otis are some of the real life characters that appears in Johnny Tremain

Answer 8

Jonny Tremain was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures as the American colonies mature. Johnny faces a crises when he injures his hand and cannot work at learning his craft; silversmithing. (8)

Unlike regular works of fiction, historical fiction portrays people who actually lived and played a role in history. John Hancock, Sam Adams, Paul Revere, and James Otis are some of the real life characters who appear in Johnny Tremain. (14)

Answer 9

"Johnny Tremain" was a historical fiction novel about a boy that matures. When the American Colonies matured, Johnny faced a crisis when he injured his hand and could no longer work at learning his silversmithing craft.

Answer 10

The word "American" should be capitalized. Replace the word "cannot" with can. It should read ".....can no longer work....."

Remove the dash from the word "unlike." Place a comma after "works of fiction." The word "history" should not be capitalized. Place a comma after Hancock and after Adams. Remove the letter "s" from "appear."