Title: Diffrent
By: Me!
Age: 13 yrs. old
(Note: This is an emo poem, not anything real-life related)
Sitting in every corner,
Growling so loud,
Watching those happy smiles,
From deep down underground.
Sadness is contagious,
Cutting in every direction,
Finding a place to fit in,
Looking through every section.
Unwanted in every place,
No friends not even a home,
Still cutting on my wrists,
Still feeling all alone.
My Glaring eyes so deep,
Being teased without no fear,
Make me mad through every sequel,
From afar and always near.
2007-03-16 10:30:47 · 16 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
that shows us the deep and sensitive u r in the inside, also u r so creative by writting this poem
2007-03-19 05:41:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely Wonderful!
2007-03-16 17:34:01 · answer #2 · answered by Tony B 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Is this your first time? It's good; I like the idea, but those lines are sorta common in almost every "emo" poem. Try to make your imagery more specific--it's nice!
2007-03-16 17:36:40 · answer #3 · answered by ¥§Anaşia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope its not based on real life!!!!! But i do like it its beautiful, and sad, depressing :(
2007-03-16 17:35:20 · answer #4 · answered by Angel M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me!!
2007-03-16 17:36:26 · answer #5 · answered by star86 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds sad, like somebody lost somebody or is very lonley
2007-03-16 17:37:15 · answer #6 · answered by NICEONEDOG 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is great!! You should enter it into a poetry contest.
2007-03-16 17:36:07 · answer #7 · answered by iwishiwereanangel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems too gloomy.. Ohh, I know!!! Add something about a monkey beating it off.... HAHAHAHA
2007-03-16 17:34:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it.
2007-03-16 17:36:48 · answer #9 · answered by Mel 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummmm nopp
2007-03-16 17:35:20 · answer #10 · answered by PriNceSz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋