Title: Love Breaks
Age: 13 yrs. Old
Love is a feeling that cannot be said,
Love is a heartbreak,
That will always be led.
Time to Time,
A hear will shake,Then you will relize this was all a fake.
Sitting there waiting,
Years of heartless sheding love,
Bring back memories from all above.
A heart is a color,
The color is black,
A heart can be broken that you will never bring back!
2007-03-15 12:42:45 · 10 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
oh whoops sorry the spelling is bad! oh yes my heart is broken... sadly.. and yes I did make this up. :)
2007-03-15 12:48:07 · update #1
Bravo! Now, Young Lady. I'd like to see something positive from you. And stop with the wanting to fall in love. You're too young to be wanting to do that, anyway. I wanna see more Positive? And far less loneliness! But it really is good!
2007-03-15 12:51:17 · answer #1 · answered by Goggles 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awesome poem!
but there is no need to be sad about love. love is a great thing. but don't fall in too deep because your heart will break. or just wait and your true love shall come.
2007-03-15 19:48:32 · answer #2 · answered by =/ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very, very emotional. Have you had your heartbroken? Cause I wrote something like this when my heart was broken by my 1st love?
2007-03-15 19:46:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try not rhyming so much, and definately correct spelling errors, it gets in the way of the reading.
2007-03-15 19:46:27 · answer #4 · answered by wigginsray 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, very nice and touching poem!
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2007-03-15 19:46:33 · answer #5 · answered by Jessica Kelly 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Did you make that up.?
2007-03-15 19:46:22 · answer #6 · answered by Gibbsy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
poor girl
2007-03-15 19:45:50 · answer #7 · answered by skims!!! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it i think great you go girl
2007-03-15 19:46:21 · answer #8 · answered by Taylor G 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad, keep it up!
2007-03-15 19:45:43 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
haha.
cute :D
2007-03-15 19:46:04 · answer #10 · answered by love<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋