I wrote it while trying to get over someone I used to love; be honest; but don't be a smartass.
Why am I in love with you
I am the definite normal
You are the oddball
Everyday I ask myself
How can I be infatuated with you
I'm from a different planet
You should not even be in my galaxy
I can't seem to ignore
Your gravitational pull
You keep me entertained
Even at the most inappropriate times
Am I really in love
Or am I just a delusional fool
Who wants to experience the feel of love
2007-03-15 07:52:13 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I like it and it makes a statement from your heart . Look at what your saying. You need someone that you have something in common with. There are reasons that only you and maybe a counselor can figure out that you are attracted to someone that is not for you. Is he the so called bad boy ? Are you aware that love last for more than six months ? The feeling is wonderful of love but, it can be painful if you are hurt and that's a chance that we all have to take in order to love fully. I like what you wrote and you should study to see that you can find it with someone that will love you back. Keep writing.
2007-03-15 08:05:45 · answer #1 · answered by rainingonme 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry and i understand what you mean love really sucks you think you've met the one person for you and thats the very person that will screw you over but i think it's really a matter of being carefull who you fall in love with and how fast you fall in love I guess i should give you an example e mail me and i will it's blackdog30000@yahoo.com
2007-03-15 14:58:42 · answer #2 · answered by Eric A 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am sure that you wrote that because of the feelings you had for this guy and it is hard getting over it. I always want to experience the feelings of love....
2007-03-15 14:57:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its ok. It doesnt suck at all, but I dont' think its the best poem i've ever read. I may be able to give you pointers if you'd like, but that didnt' seem to be what you were asking for. Also, from your lyrics, it doesnt sound like love, just attraction.
2007-03-15 15:03:24 · answer #4 · answered by Keiko M 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good because you are expressing how you feel, but the poem just doesnt flow right. I think you need revise you sentence breaks and maybe add in a word or two to help the rythm of it
2007-03-15 14:59:20 · answer #5 · answered by decent_averageguy 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's okay...but it doesn't suck...sucking is a really good thing and my opinion of the poem is mediocre (but then I'm not a big poetry fan these days).
2007-03-15 14:55:31 · answer #6 · answered by . 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very interesting and I definitely get where you are coming from with it. I hope it helped you to get over that person.
2007-03-15 14:56:54 · answer #7 · answered by tersey562 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is really good. It is a healthy way to explore and express your emotions. Keep writing!
2007-03-15 14:56:15 · answer #8 · answered by Horace 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's cute, and it comes from your heart.
Not sure if you're in love though, you don't explain much. Maybe it's just dissapointment.
Still it's very nice.
2007-03-15 14:55:27 · answer #9 · answered by grldragon101 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have to experience love to know the pain but it is ok to feel the pain. that way you know what love really is..it is cool it dont suck~
2007-03-15 14:59:42 · answer #10 · answered by Warm_Hearted 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋