Throughout the soft and timeless days of March
Until now the shadows begin to grow much shorter
The sunset's fire has deepened blood red
I give you this, the first rose of spring
A token of my unyielding love
So when the winter's mantle leaves the earth
And all around seems dead and cold
This rose reminds you of a time when all is warm and living
Do not despair, mother nature simply awakes
In sleep she has well earned
'Til one day not so very far from now
With the opening of the first rose buds I shall return
2007-03-14 07:44:56 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Hi
That was a great poem and kinda romantic too .
C
2007-03-14 08:00:42 · answer #1 · answered by Constance M 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eloquent, much better than some of the crap i have seen on this site
points for it not being too mushy and it still sounding pretty
2007-03-14 14:49:55 · answer #2 · answered by amazing 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes i like it
2007-03-14 14:48:59 · answer #3 · answered by netta 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
......beautiful, such a nice poem to reflect on love and spring its such a beautiful time of year and I think you have captured the spirit perfectly!
2007-03-14 15:01:55 · answer #4 · answered by crashdog492 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is beautiful and that is saying sumthin. wow man ur deep
2007-03-14 14:49:10 · answer #5 · answered by pistoluser 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice.!.!.!.!.!.!.
2007-03-14 14:48:00 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋