Once I dreamed that love would come and sweep me up away
Now it seems life's passed me by, I'm still alone today
Looks like it'll always be the same
No one here to comfort me
All alone, no one cares.
So much to give to you all out there.
Take me now, in your arms.
Let me rest, safe from harm.
Ohhh.... I want to be loved...
I need to be loved...
Won't somebody love me....
I am ready to cry.....
2007-03-14 06:08:56 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Go Judas Priest...
rock on.... lol
2007-03-14 09:33:42 · answer #1 · answered by ﺸÐïåMóñdÐôññåﺸ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...sounds kind of sad..but i do like it..if u wanna get it published go to poetry.com and submit it. they will send u something in the mail for u to initial and send back. its absolutely free except for the stamp. and u can even buy the book its published in. ur work remains urs they just put it in a book with other poems for everyone all over the world to read.u could even win $10000 if its good enough. good luck.
2007-03-14 13:12:32 · answer #2 · answered by blondie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
started out good , fell away towards the end . 4/10
2007-03-14 13:14:28 · answer #3 · answered by g.reef 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's lovely, And I'm sure someone wants to give you a big hug!!!
2007-03-14 13:12:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wanna learn how to tell if a man is lying? ask us if we would like to read your poems, if he says yes remember the face, that's his lying face
2007-03-14 18:00:51 · answer #5 · answered by eyesinthedrk 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can see this at a play. Nice poem!
2007-03-14 13:13:29 · answer #6 · answered by G-BOY 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That sounds really desperate ..and quite common really
2007-03-14 13:13:43 · answer #7 · answered by n 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds desperate
2007-03-14 13:11:00 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds exactly like me at this moment.....yes i do like it very much.....it is very symbolic of how you are feeling, and shows your emotions.......I wish you the best.........
2007-03-14 13:13:40 · answer #9 · answered by pilotmanitalia 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem.
2007-03-14 13:12:18 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋