Rate my poem?

Question

Rain
by Bethany

As the rain falls.
And she sits and thinks.
She watches the trees blow in the wind.
Watches the cars roar through the streets.
She watches the rain fall from the sky.
She sits and thinks.
Trying not to cry.

1=bad 10=Great!

Thanks for the tips and feedback.

Answer 1

i would give it a 8 it was good and it is showing the emotion of the person

Answer 2

5

Answer 3

I think this would be a great poem for a 2nd grader. If you are a 2nd grader I give you a 7 for descriptive imagery. If you are older than that then I would have to say a 2. You are descriptive enough to get points for effort, but the overall poem doesn't make me "feel" anything. It doesn't seem to have any rhythm. You could try to use more adjectives and metaphoric meaning. I hope I am not offending you in any way, but you wanted my opinion. It's a great start, have fun making it even better! :)

Answer 4

It's really bad if it's a diet and fitness poem lol. If it's just a poem poem, it's okay, I'd give it a six. It's a little better than the average poem, but you need something that will make it stand out. Good luck and God bless.

Answer 5

If you are in 5th grade- I would give it a 10. If you are a sophmore in high school I would give it a 5.

Answer 6

Rating: 6

It needs more hun. You started great, but you know that you could add more lines, more "story"...you don't have to have a book, but something more to describe "why" or "result".

Answer 7

F

your poem doesnt have anything to do with diet and fitness!

Answer 8

4

Not so bad, but I have a feeling you can do better. Keep going.

Answer 9

0.5

Generic, poor in word choice, not entirely meaningless, but close.

Answer 10

6 !!!!!!!!!!