can you help me to give an example for this paragraph ?

Question

as an example you can use my father , brother or my country.

It is a good idea for young adults to serve their country. First , young adult protect their country by joining to the military forces. joint forces help to secure country from direct attack through military activities overseas,planing and exucution of homeland defense and support to civil authorities. Furthurmore, they help deal with catastrophic emergencies from terrorist acts as well as from explosions, fires, natural disasters such as hurricanes and floods,and infections diseases, which are much more likely to occur.

Answer 1

Your father and brother must serve in the armed forces to protect the security of your country. They can fight in countries that harbors terrorism so that you can sleep in peace at your home.

Answer 2

I don't know what you are trying to write this for.. I am confused, but I am also confused because you say that they are trying to do all this stuff while in the military and not all of it is military, national disasters such as fire are very often NOT fought by military, in fact I personally know of a whole lot of fire fighters that hate when the National Guard shows up because they don't know what they are doing.

Answer 3

Correct the spelling and break up the paragraph. It is too long and covers too many subjects! Your sentences are too long as well!

I think it is good if ALL young adults serve their country. Not just a select few who often come from the poor side of town!

Answer 4

I agree but with one change... that the duty to their country should not mandatorily be military service. As Americans, we are taught to be able to have choices and to select our own politics, if someone does not agree with a war or even war in general, they should have the right to not participate.

BUT, I am ok with those in this case having an alternative option of assisting in humanitarian organizations...