Dear Honorable President of the United States of America, George W. Bush:
I am Daniel ***** (18) from Guatemala City, I would like to thank you, your wife and your cabinet, for the visit you guys made to my country, this visit represents the friendship of the United States of America with the Guatemalan goverment. I also would like to say Guatemala is always going to be an allie to the United States of America as long as the Democracy prevails. It was such a pleasure your visit here in Guatemala, I was watching your arrival at my roof with my brother Pablo, I also saw the F-15's escolting and leading the Air Force One while you were in the air. My sister Claudia was at the Control Tower, making sure everything was OK, she, by the way was excited, too.
Mr. President you are welcome again to our country, no matter if it is an official arrival or a personal travel, I hope you to come visit my country again, and maybe you come down to my house to drink some guatemalancoffee
2007-03-13 11:58:41 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I am Daniel ***** (18) from Guatemala City. I would like to thank you, your wife, and your cabinet for the visit you ('you guys' sounds very unprofessional!!) made to my country. This visit represents the friendship of the United States of America with the Guatemalan government. I also would like to say that Guatemala is always going to be an ally to the United States of America as long as the Democracy prevails. Your visit was such a pleasure here in Guatemala. I was watching your arrival at my roof with my brother Pablo. I also saw the F-15's escolting and leading the Air Force One while you were in the air. My sister Claudia was at the Control Tower, making sure everything was OK. She, by the way, was excited, too.
Mr. President, you are welcome again to our country no matter if it is an official arrival or just for personal travel. I hope you to come visit my country again, and maybe you can come down to my house to drink some Guatemalan coffee.
Sincerely,
Daniel *****
Also, there's a lot of repitition in here. You should find different ways to say that you enjoyed their visit. Keep in mind that when you write a professional/formal letter, you need to double space after a period. And tab before you start each paragraph. :) Good luck.
2007-03-13 12:11:06 · answer #1 · answered by Gina Chess 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great letter! Here's a few grammatical changes
I am Daniel ***** (18) from Guatemala City, I would like to thank you, your wife and your cabinet for the visit you guys made to my country. this visit represents the friendship of the United States of America the Guatemalan GOVERNMENT. I also would like to say Guatemala will always be an ALLY to the United States of America as long as democracy prevails. Your visit was such a pleasure visit here. I was watching your arrival at my roof with my brother Pablo, I also saw the F-15's ESCALATING and leading the Air Force One while you were in the air. My sister Claudia was at the Control Tower, making sure everything was OK. She, by the way, was excited, too.
Mr. President, you are welcome again to our country, whether it's official or personal travel. I hope you come visit my country again, and maybe come down to my house to drink some GUATAMALAN COFFEE
2007-03-13 12:09:36 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
probably dont want to say "you guys" because it sounds a little too casual. at the end of country there should be a period and then start "this visit represents..." as a new sentence. allie is actually spelled ally. after "making sure everything was ok there should be a ; not a , . last sentence "maybe u CAN come..." the context is great just fix those couple of things.
2007-03-13 12:09:15 · answer #3 · answered by *emily* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a well-intentioned letter, but a friend having a strong grasp of English composition could help you polish this letter even stronger.
Start out by saying, "Thank you for taking the time to visit Guatamala." There is no need to say, "I would like to thank you." Just say it.
Crucial punctuation is necessary throughout the letter. End the letter with your signature block. No need to start it out with, "I am Daniel **** (18) . . ."
Once your letter is polished with help from an English grammarian you ought to send it.
2007-03-13 12:14:10 · answer #4 · answered by Guitarpicker 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes i think you did fine!
2007-03-13 12:44:28 · answer #5 · answered by golondris_1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's awesome!
2007-03-13 12:01:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
:D. it sounds good but instead of using guys use "you" or something formal
2007-03-13 12:08:01 · answer #7 · answered by lilchicana924 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say it's great, but I'm anti-Bush, so sorry, can't answer your question there
2007-03-13 12:02:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
k
2007-03-13 12:01:41 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I awesome!... The other girls said it all lmao.
2007-03-13 12:13:53 · answer #10 · answered by нιкαяι 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋