Baby I’m writing this poem for you,
to express all the feelings I have tours you.
I love you with all my heart,
you complete me you’re my other half.
I’m so thankful that God put you in my life,
because without you I don’t know where I’d be
or how I would survive.
I found true love something people never find
I feel so lucky and so blessed
I can’t belive I found my soul mate.
You’re my lover, and my best friend
baby let’s make it til the end.
You and me together,
always and forever.
2007-03-13 10:50:08 · 31 answers · asked by sexylatina0321 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
The truth? It's a hideous poem. But if my husband wrote it for me, I'd have tears of joy in my eyes and enormous warmth in my heart.
Your bf won't see what I see, the lack of literary style or any of that. All he will see is the intense love and gratitude that you have for him being with you.
It's the best kind of poem, even if you ain't Elizabeth Barrett Browning.
And if he doesn't love it... smack him upside his head. jk
2007-03-13 10:54:04 · answer #1 · answered by shoestring_louise 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
change some of the things around like.. . .
baby nothing can express my feelings towards you
without you in my world i wouldn't know what to do
our love is something that most people never find
you are my soul mate and are always kind
i feel so blessed for faith to bring us together
and with our kind of love we will last forever
We will make it to the end, though the good and bad
i can count on you to make me happy when sad
i'm writing this now to show how blessed i am to be with you
but no words can discribe how much i'm in love with you
i dont know something like that i hope it helped good luck
2007-03-13 18:05:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well if my girlfriend gave me that (and i felt the same way) i would want to put a ring on her finger right then and there!! Love is amazing, people will tell you he wont like it and that it sux but they obviously arnt in love, i know that it would make my year if my true love gave me that, go for it!! Its better than any gift, its from the heart its amazing and well i wish i had written it.
Good luck!
2007-03-13 17:58:19 · answer #3 · answered by prince14 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like to write poems too. its ok if you were going for that mushy feel. think about it, although guys want to know that you care do you really think he is that sensitive to appreciate something like this? coming from a guy, it would be nice but giving it to one. not so much.
2007-03-13 17:55:34 · answer #4 · answered by melissa c 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be honest it is horrible. You have taken lines out of movies
IE Jerry McGuire "You Complete Me"
Go back to the drawing board
2007-03-13 17:55:16 · answer #5 · answered by Mike 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
umm, your poetry writing skills are subpar, however i'm sure he'll appreciate the sentiment. you should run a spell check though, or perhaps look something up online that expresses your feelings more clearly..
2007-03-13 17:54:26 · answer #6 · answered by jj 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know many guys who really like poems and that, and especially anything that suggests love and committment. But I dont know your boyfriend so I couldnt tell you for sure.
2007-03-13 17:52:16 · answer #7 · answered by radiancia 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i am glad you 2 are young...i do not like the poem...but your heart is in the right place...that means more than anything...always follow your heart...i do and am old...has always worked for me...good luck...
2007-03-13 17:54:50 · answer #8 · answered by Michael K 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem, but unless you bf is really into this kind of stuff dont expect much of a reaction from him but it really is a nice poem
2007-03-13 17:54:42 · answer #9 · answered by emma 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ITS GOOD BUT WHAT IF HE DOESNT WANT TO BE YOUR SOUL MATE I THINK THAT WOULS BE A GOOD POEM TO GIVE TO YOUR FIANCE OR HUSBAND NOT REALY A GOOD IDEA FOR A BOYFREIND
GOOD LUCK WITH THAT
2007-03-13 17:57:07 · answer #10 · answered by butterfly18 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋