You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to chat on yahoo IM with any girl who likes my poem (or add me to your buddy list)
2007-03-13 02:55:47 · 7 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Health ➔ Diet & Fitness
Personally I think it's a bit over the top.
Just a touch on the 'mushy' side, but not bad.
Then again, maybe I'm just too old for this, since I'm not a 'girl' but a woman....
Good luck though. Keep it up.
2007-03-13 03:03:24 · answer #1 · answered by Aussie mum 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you trying to get a date I have read this poem twice by you.
Go out and find real people
2007-03-13 10:12:13 · answer #2 · answered by Crystal Blue 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds to me like you are really obsessed with this person. I hope you truly find them in this world!
2007-03-13 10:00:20 · answer #3 · answered by kim_n_orlando 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWWWWW ... i LOVE it! if only a guy who lives near me know how to write a poem like that for me.
The only poems i get from guys our sexual related lol
2007-03-13 10:04:53 · answer #4 · answered by pinay804 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm its sweet,i guess, but it's a bit too over the top for me!
2007-03-13 10:39:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i wish i recieved that from my ex haha. j/k it is really nice
2007-03-13 10:06:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no..too cliche.
2007-03-13 10:33:18 · answer #7 · answered by MalinaB 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋