They say lack of effort and they point fingers at me, but at one time I was an innocent child , so blame society. They tell me I'm stuck in criminal code, but if they lived my life then they'd know I'm stuck in survival mode. You see where I come from hellos are brief and goodbys are forever, Success stories are rare and almost never. Trying to survive long enough to get out the hood is not easy you see, so don't tell me how to act, or think untill you'v been me. Stop putting on a front, cause to you I'm only another number, if I die or live, it won't effect your slumber. You see the only thing I've ever known will be the reason my life comes to an end. I'll die lost, and lonely without a true friend.
But that's life, that's the hand I was dealt. Stop trying to understand you'll never know the pain, and hurt that I've felt.
2007-03-12 21:20:46 · 10 answers · asked by lando 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
what do you think? read the others I've posted.
2007-03-12 21:21:11 · update #1
lata... your right, I'm 24 now moved out the hood got married and I'm enjoying my kids, I reachout to kids like me now.
2007-03-12 21:28:45 · update #2
Another good one.
2007-03-12 21:25:15 · answer #1 · answered by Speedy 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it's okay, but it's too bad there's so much blame on society...whatever happened to you as a child is what you should be using to make yourself a stronger person...you can't use those excuses anymore as an adult...you may not have chosen how your life started out but you sure as hell can control how it ends up
2007-03-13 04:26:52 · answer #2 · answered by lata 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u r doing some great writing and by the sound of it doing some great work ! well done !
2007-03-14 11:39:40 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Honesty ♥.•´ `*.¸ ♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope this is not really you...and if so...don't commit crimes---write poetry LOL!! Cause it's great WTG-good job!!
2007-03-13 04:25:28 · answer #4 · answered by Lisa Kay 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is so sad it makes me wanna cry and its how ive felt sometimes
huge winks
2007-03-13 04:28:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like your poetry
2007-03-13 04:34:17 · answer #6 · answered by heveansent 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very well written.
2007-03-13 04:25:14 · answer #7 · answered by SGElite 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very good you got talent!!!!!
2007-03-13 04:25:29 · answer #8 · answered by Kimberly S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW.. that is good. and also sad.... good job hun.
2007-03-13 05:05:57 · answer #9 · answered by Ashley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you wrote that, then it's good.
2007-03-13 04:25:22 · answer #10 · answered by good things last 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋