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have anyone can help me to check out my sentance grammar

sentance: All the vital productions are guaranteed for processing in the Level 10 Clean room

or

sentance: All the vital productions must be process in level 10 clean room. Guarantteed!

2007-03-12 20:20:14 · 4 answers · asked by arvinchung 1 in Society & Culture Languages

4 answers

I'd say :

All the vital productions are guaranteed to be processed in a level 10 clean room.

Cause the first sentence is ambiguous and you might think the prods have only the possibility to be processed, and the second sentence is too colloquial.

Hope it helped.

2007-03-12 20:43:28 · answer #1 · answered by MrNatas 2 · 0 0

What are vital productions? Could you mean "products"?--products are much more likely to be processed than are productions. Not sure what you mean by vital either, or the Level 10 Clean room. Is this a guarantee of how clean the room the products are processed in is? I'd say "in a room that's Level 10 clean" but I still don't know how clean that is. "the level 10 clean room" to me means a specific room that's clean but not necessarily really clean. Level 10 sounds more like the floor number.

All the vital products are guaranteed to have been processed in a room that's Level 10 clean.

Unless by "vital" you mean food? Then All food products...

2007-03-13 04:11:46 · answer #2 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0 0

All of the vital productions are guaranteed to be processed in the Level 10 Clean Room.

or

All of the vital productions will be processed in the Level 10 Clean Room guaranteed.

2007-03-13 03:29:40 · answer #3 · answered by MTU 2 · 0 0

grammar is fine in the first sentence...
but i think u shud brush up in ur spelings..hehe

2007-03-13 03:29:36 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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