The day's just beginning
You see the girl you love
You don't know what to do or say
You're friends
You talk to eachother everyday
On the phone, computer, etc
You're walking with her
Talking, laughing, having the time of your life
The sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you
It's time to say goodbye
You hug and walk off
You're walking, past places where we played as kids
Later you talk to eachother
Time's ending
You say you'll see eachother tomorrow
You know what
You're in goddamn love
Is there anything else better in the world
2007-03-12 11:32:21 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I love it! Its so sweet......i love the last to lines...........
2007-03-12 11:40:21 · answer #1 · answered by Alex C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it comes direct from heart...it got a lil choppy in the mid way but the ending was pretty good...
u put ur feelings simply but gracefully into a poem
good work..if ur poems speaks ur mind, then way to go boy...mail it to her ;)
good luck...tc
2007-03-12 18:43:24 · answer #2 · answered by close_in_destroy_everything 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's cute. If you like this person so much, that you think you're in love with them I would have to say tell them, who knows, they might just love you back!
2007-03-12 18:38:04 · answer #3 · answered by Elizabeth B 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I not a poet but you should submit it I think it is the best poem i heard in my life!
2007-03-12 18:49:29 · answer #4 · answered by hg 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2007-03-12 18:36:00 · answer #5 · answered by la buena bruja 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it it wus so cute that is so my poem lol
2007-03-12 18:37:41 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is good
2007-03-12 18:39:51 · answer #7 · answered by Dope 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋