That is how I want it to be
One day I'll know and see
The man God planned out for me
He'll love me with all he is
He'll be mine, and I'll be his
That's how I want it to be
The love life God planned out for me
We'll have as many kids as we can
All according to God's plan
They'll be the most wonderful children God ever created
They will be loved and never hated
That's how I want it to be
The children God plans out for me
Together, him and me, we'll grow old
Watching our kids become wonderfully grown
They'll get married, and have their own kids
Like us, teaching them about God and how to be His
That's how I want it to be
Grandchildren, God plans out for me
Yes,That's how I want it to be
A good life God plans out for me
2007-03-11 11:40:51 · 3 answers · asked by godsgirl200718 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Nice job! I like the rhyming (not easy to do, for sure), and the number of syllables in each line flow well throughout the poem. Keep it up!
2007-03-11 11:45:26 · answer #1 · answered by Sheerhobbit 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice job! Rhymes really well, I say extend on it.
2007-03-11 18:53:44 · answer #2 · answered by scorpiontiger00 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good, never seen anyother people on the site wrote a great poam as you did.
2007-03-11 19:39:05 · answer #3 · answered by carmen111 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋