If u wana get 2 points , just read these lines & give an answer(comment) or any thing. so who wana?

Question

Life it’s ransome, what just the love can ransome
Rescue from gloom, melancholic, monotomy
Love, what moves every rock what gets in his way
Just to be able to dream, to imagine.
Love, what require so much feelings, care, fantasy
Every litle breath we take, we take it from it.
Every hearth beat, beats for love and to be loved.
We hope, that we can see him again, feel it agaim.
Feel as the heart shouts, screems
Just a word what he whispered, from what the heart calmed.

Answer 1

Poetry is lost on me. Tell me what it says.

Answer 2

This poem smacks of poor grammar, and poor spelling. And the messages you're trying to convey is quite vague. I surmise it's about life and love, There are no words such as ransome. You probably mean Life is a ransom. Although I don't quite grab the facsimile. Melancholy ( noun) for melancholic.


To compare love to every rock that (instead of what) gets in the way is a poor equation. You can describe love in better ways. Love does require so much feelings, care; time and efforts. Heart beat not hearth (firestone or fireplace) I hope the Him you referred to is the Jesus Christ, our Lord. Because only He deserves that sublime kind of love. Screams, not screems. Finally from what the heart calmed ( calm is the right spelling). However, the heart doesn't calm. Love ,faith, emotions can calm the restless heart.

Sorry for the critical comments on your soliloquy.

Answer 3

There were a few spelling mistakes but that was an amazing poem, especially because its not completely obvious what it means; you have to think about it for a little bit.

Answer 4

I read it but think some of your words are wrong.like ransom,melancholy,love that moves,we take from it, again, There, I think it is okay now. I hope you get your 2 points.

Answer 5

Very nice, just fix the spelling errors here and there.

Answer 6

Nice.

Answer 7

i liked it