Jesus will save us
If you believe with your heart
Speak it with your tongue.
Not a Christian, felt up to the challenge.
2007-03-10 01:29:56
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answer #1
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answered by iamnoone 7
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This is pretty cool. I'll give it a shot, though this might wind up being more of a senryu (which is still 5-7-5), because a haiku is generally about nature. Senryu is actually supposed to be on human nature, and can sometimes be more of a parody. I'm a published poet (even if I don't know why, lol), sorry, had to add that in. Anyway, here goes.
Christ, the Son of God
Through the ages, a beacon
Of love unequaled.
This Savior of all
is supposed to shine through all
Who call Him Lord God.
I guess it was two for the price of one, lol. They're not very good. I think I'M the one who needs more coffee, though I should be wide awake!
2007-03-10 02:44:09
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answer #2
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answered by The_Cricket: Thinking Pink! 7
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I looked up haiku, I'll try to write one for you. Sounds like a fun project, thanks! :) I'll edit asap.
OK this one is for you, I hope I did it right.
Everyday I pray
With Jesus on my laptop
Gods will I won't stop
lol, that was fun. Do poets put a whole bunch of them together or are they always really short? Should they rhyme?
Pagan Earthgirl, your haiku is beautiful!
2007-03-10 16:26:04
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answer #3
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answered by rezany 5
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each and every sort of persons adventure persecution for each sort of reasons. All it proves it which you have trodden on somebody's feet. it is likewise authentic that each and every physique get a sprint persecution at it sluggish or different. each and every physique isn't programmed to renowned the different person's attitude no remember if it somewhat is in conflict with their own. Jehovah witnesses are into taking converts from different religions, and this ticks them off. does not lead them to greater outstanding, purely in conflict with the hobbies of alternative communities.
2016-10-18 00:49:13
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answer #4
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answered by Erika 4
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Sorry Haiku has
Set rules that are not open
Interpretation
Requires us to think through
We cannot reply unless
our KJV tells us to.
2007-03-11 08:40:38
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answer #5
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answered by awayforabit 5
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A reason for the seasons
A wonder to the world
A friend with you
Until the very end
2007-03-10 16:25:24
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answer #6
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answered by Da Mick 5
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I love haiku!
The only problem I have with the subject of haiku is: people don't know how to read or write it. I cringe every time I read feeble attempts at writing this wonderful genre.
Haiku is not just about syllabic 5-7-5 it's much more than that.
*Now, how'd ya like that mini-rant with your coffee?*
2007-03-10 01:32:45
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answer #7
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answered by Anonymous
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Christian:
Lord Savior Jesus
Died for all our transgressions
Praise God Almighy!
Atheist:
God does not exist
Just accept it believers
Ok, I need coffee
2007-03-10 01:33:51
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answer #8
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answered by Anonymous
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i'm a christian and my beliefs are laid out in the apostle's creed....i know i can't write a haiku so i'm not gonna try...
2007-03-10 16:25:56
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answer #9
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answered by Bubuchachum 6
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Crucified on Cross,
Three days later rose again,
To save us from sin.
2007-03-10 01:47:08
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answer #10
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answered by irishcharmer84 2
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