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Question

Before knowing the content of the holiday itself, it is vital to understand the mooncake. Legend has it that the mooncake was used to overthrow the Mongol empire. Emperor Zhu came up with the idea of Mooncake to coincide with the mid-autumn festival. He sought to distribute mooncakes to all residents to bless the longevity of the Mongol Emperor. Within each mooncake was a message. On the night of the Moon Festival, the rebels successfully attacked and overthrew the Mongol’s. The latter, the mooncake became celebrated on a national level along with the celebration of the luxuriant of the summers harvest. This event made mooncakes a key in this festival.
As early as one month before the event, Chinese restaurants in the neighboring Chinese neighborhoods sell mooncakes. Mooncakes are considered a delicacy that is only made for this holiday which is why most places start to sell them a month before.

Answer 1

The main mistake that pops out at me is when you say, "...the rebels successfully attacked and overthrew the Mongol's."

Mongols is not possessive, it's plural, so it doesn't need an apostrophe. It should read, "...the rebels successfully attacked and overthrew the Mongols."

Answer 2

Before learning about the holiday itself, it is vital to understand an important delicacy associated with it -- the mooncake. Legend has it that Emperor Zhu came up with the idea of the mooncake a food to serve during the mid-autumn festival. He sought to distribute mooncakes to all residents to bless the longevity of the Mongol Emperor. Within each mooncake was a message (what did it say?) . On the night of the Moon Festival, the Chinese army successfully attacked and overthrew the Mongols. Soon after, the mooncake became celebrated on a national level along with the celebration of the summer's harvest. From then on, mooncakes became a vital part of each year's Moon Festival.
Because mooncakes are specially created for the holiday, Chinese restaurants in the neighborhood begin selling mooncakes a month before the Moon Festival actually takes place. < I think this paragraph needs help. rewrite it
good job!

Answer 3

Is "mooncakes" supposed to be capitalized? Sometimes you do, sometimes you don't. Pick one and stick with it. (Preferably lowercase ... )

"The latter, the mooncake became celebrated on a national level along with the celebration of the luxuriant of the summers harvest"

This doesn't make sense. It should say something more like ...

They (or The Mongols) decided to celebrate mooncakes on a national level ....

"neighboring Chinese neighborhoods.."

choose a different word for "neighborhoods" such as "towns, areas, townships, cities, settlements, etc"

Answer 4

That was just beautiful I think I almost cried.