The day's just beginning,
You see the girl you love,
You don't know what to do or say,
You're friends,
You talk to eachother everyday,
On the phone, computer, etc,
You're walking with her,
Talking, laughing, having the time of your life,
The sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you,
It's time to say goodbye,
You hug and walk off,
You're walking, past places where we played as kids,
Later you talk to eachother,
Time's ending,
You say you'll see eachother tomorrow,
You know what,
You're in goddamn love,
Is there anything else better in the world
2007-03-09 11:54:47 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
i like it.
ur poem explains how you feel about this certain girl.
its sweet.
2007-03-09 11:59:49 · answer #1 · answered by the.journey.is.the.reward. C.P. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is like a sequence of events. I do like it though. It's saying that you have feelings for this gurl and your in love with her.
2007-03-09 20:46:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it because it shows that you care about someone and you took it out of you. Tell her you love her! i wouldnt call it a poem though.
2007-03-09 20:11:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it just sounds like a sequence of events, no offense, but i'm not really that much into poems, so i wouldn't really know
2007-03-09 19:58:42 · answer #4 · answered by xoxox 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OH,not bad,not bad,and it does express your feelings.
2007-03-09 20:00:41 · answer #5 · answered by Butch46 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was oright you should of put your heart in it
2007-03-09 20:00:49 · answer #6 · answered by Marie m 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋