DOod - i Am one badas pote! Here gose:
oNs upone a tiem
I saw a litil rime
it was so bAd
that it maed me Sad
and now i liev a liEf of CrIME!
2007-03-09 02:06:52 · 3 answers · asked by Ansre Man! 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Sounds Greek. Good that I can understand Greek.
Once upon a time
I saw a little rhyme
It was so bad
That it made me sad
And now I live a life of crime!
well, crime and poetry are not passionate bedfellows! One lies with cops, the other flatters with crime victims.
Good luck.
2007-03-09 15:10:10 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Just a suggestion:
*Check spelling
* Add emotion
* You haven't written a poem, it's lines w/ breaks. Basically you need more than stanza's for a poem, it's not all about ryhming...
:) Good luck as a poet.
2007-03-09 03:24:59 · answer #2 · answered by Payhton E 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Can't understand it.
2007-03-09 02:17:13 · answer #3 · answered by Khurram 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋