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With and Without Cell Phone
Nowadays in the high-tech world, people live in more and more convenient and comfortable lives. According to the report, nearly every family in Taiwan has one or more than one cell phone(s). A cell Phone has many functions besides talking, such as multiple-chord ringtone and camera function; as a result, many people especially youngster like to talk to their friends by phone. These mean how important a cell phone is in our daily lives.
In spite of the fact that the electromagnetic waves from cell phones can affect and harm our brains if using a phone too often, I am unable to live in the world without any cell phone. This doesn’t mean that I like to chat with my family and friends very much by using a cell phone, but a cell phone can build a bridge that connects our hearts and increases the relationship between me and my family or friends. In spite of the fact that I am away from home for something and live alone, I still can talk to my family and friends about my moods and share my life experiences with them by using a cell phone as though they were beside me and took care of me. Without a cell phone, I feel as if the world around us is crumbling down. Therefore, a cell phone is just like the pat of our bodies; a phone plays a quite vital character and it spices up our lives.

2007-03-08 18:47:03 · 5 answers · asked by Z 1 in Society & Culture Languages

5 answers

(I made some stylistic changes as well, to reflect more "natural" usage. Great job!)

Life With and Without a Cell Phone
In today's high-tech world, people live in more and more convenient and comfortable lives. According to the report, nearly every family in Taiwan has one or more cell phones. A cell phone has many functions besides talking, such as multiple-chord ringtones and camera functionality; as a result, many people, especially young people, like to talk to their friends by phone. This shows how important a cell phone is in our daily lives.
In spite of the fact that electromagnetic waves from cell phones can affect and harm our brains if using a phone too often, I am unable to live in a world without cell phones. This doesn’t mean that I like to chat with my family and friends that much on my cell phone, but a cell phone can build a bridge that connects our hearts and intensifies the relationship between me and my family and friends. In spite of the fact that I am away from home and live alone, I still can talk to my family and friends about how I'm doing and share my life experiences with them by using a cell phone as though they were beside me and were taking care of me. Without a cell phone, I would feel as if the world around us were crumbling. Therefore, a cell phone is just like a part of our bodies; a phone plays quite a vital role and it spices up our lives.

2007-03-08 19:03:58 · answer #1 · answered by JP 7 · 1 0

The Cell Phone
In this high-tech world, people live more and more convenient and comfortable lives. According to the report, nearly every family in Taiwan has one or more cell phones.
A cell phone has many functions besides talking, such as multiple-chord ringtone and camera function.
As a result, many people especially youngsters like to talk to their friends by phone. Cell phones are important in our daily lives.
In spite of the fact that the electromagnetic waves from cell phones can affect and harm our brains if using a phone too often, I am unable to live in the world without a cell phone. This doesn’t mean that I like to chat with my family and friends very much, but a cell phone can build a bridge that connects our hearts and increases the relationship between my family or friends and me. In spite of the fact that I am away from home and live alone, I still can talk to my family and friends about my moods and share my life experiences with them by using a cell phone as though they were beside me and taking care of me. Without a cell phone, I feel as if the world around us is crumbling down. Therefore, a cell phone is just like a part of our bodies. It plays a vital role and spices up our lives.

2007-03-08 19:00:12 · answer #2 · answered by Tenn Gal 6 · 0 0

Life With or Without Cell Phones
Nowadays, in the high-tech world, people are living a more convenient, comfortable life. According to reports, nearly every family in Taiwan has one, or more than one cell phone. A cell phone has many functions besides talking, such as multiple-chord ring-tone with camera function. As a result, many people, especially young people, like to talk to their friends by phone. This shows how important a cell phone has become in our daily lives.
In spite of the fact that the electromagnetic waves from cell phones can affect and harm our brains, if using a phone too often, I am unable to live in the world without a cell phone. This doesn't mean that I like to chat with my family and friends very much by using a cell phone, but a cell phone can build a bridge that connects our hearts and increases the relationship between myself, my family and my friends. I am away from home and live alone, but I can still talk to my family and friends about my moods and share my life experiences with them by using a cell phone as though they were right beside me. Without a cell phone, I feel as if the world around us would crumble. Therefore, a cell phone is just like a part of our body. A cell phone fills quite a vital need and it spices up our lives.

i hope i helped! :)

2007-03-08 19:17:30 · answer #3 · answered by Sandra Dee 5 · 1 0

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2016-12-18 09:03:17 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Good job!

Let's take it line by line.

If you see ellipses (dots that look like these "...", it means that the original structure remains the same. So if the ellipses are before a sentence, that means that the previous words in that line are unchanged (as in line 2).

If the ellipses appear in the middle of the sentence (as in line 3), that means that it is suggested that the original words be used at the beginning but change the structure in the middle and continue with the original words at the end.

With and Without Cellular Phone

Line 1: Advanced technology makes procedures more convenient and people's lives more comfortable.
Line 2: ... more than one cellular phone.
Line 3: A cellular phone has many functions besides communication. There is now the multiple-chord ringtone and camera function; as...
Line 4: ...especially the youth...
Line 5: This means that the cellular phone is important in our daily living.
Line 6. In spite the fact that...
Line 7: brains if the cellular phone is often used,
Line 8: ...like to talk a lot using the cellular phone
Line 9: ...can build bridges that connect our hearts...improves the relationship
Line 10: between myself and my family and friends.
Line 11: Even though I am out of the house
Line 12: (please delete "for something") and live alone
Line 13: ...and take care of me.
Line 14: Therefore, a cellular phone is like an extension of our body, because it plays a...

2007-03-08 19:18:32 · answer #5 · answered by tranquil 6 · 0 11

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