If it isn't good, tell me it isn't good. If it is good....then tell me it's good.
Thanks for reading.
Lost and Confused
When I am with her,
It's you I think of,
When she speaks to me,
It's you that I hear,
When you're there with me,
You're all I can see.
Someone else loves me,
But when I fall asleep,
It's not her that I see,
I drift away to you.
My heart on a treadmill,
Running to you,
But never getting closer,
To telling you.
The best day of my life,
Is any day with you,
I sit and wonder,
Do you ever think of me?
Here's another poem that I wrote 30 minutes ago.
http://ca.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Auyl3RODce9bPKPGo1aIRLHAFQx.?qid=20070308112759AA4T3JU
If you haven't guessed by now...the poem is about me, the girl is a very close friend of mine, she's in a relationship, and so am I. If I go for her and it fails, we both lose alot, but if it doesn't fail......then...
Should I go for it?
2007-03-08 07:10:49 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
yo man dat poem is BEAST
go fo da chik u lik bro
peace
2007-03-08 07:15:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that this is a lot of problems that people like. i love my boyfriend so much and sometimes i feel like there is another person i think i should be with. he is an amazing person but i dont think we would last just have fun together. and now we arent friends anymore because i really hurt him bad. you have got to think about who you are going to hurt the most and who you are going to want to spend the rest of your life with i know that is a lot but i never thought i would be the guy i am with now for three and a half years. i want to spend the rest of my life with him. just think about what you are going to do before you make a big mistake
2007-03-08 15:17:57 · answer #2 · answered by ~ashley~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds to me that you really care for her. Does she give you any hope does it seem like she might like you back? Life is way too short i say you for it why are you anyways with someone who loves you but you dont love her wasting her time & yours. Just go for your friend who knows what if she fells the same. Follow your heart good luck. :)
2007-03-08 15:20:14 · answer #3 · answered by Erika G 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem. Wait for someone to get broken up with (you and girlfriend and/or girl you like + her boyfriend) then see if she's interested in you.
2007-03-08 15:18:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is sooooooooo sweet.. iwish a dude rite somethin like that 4 me.... go 4 it cuz if u writin poems like that about her that should tell u somethin...and if i was yo chick ill feel really offended
2007-03-08 15:16:49 · answer #5 · answered by mesha 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh my god it's ok but she won't fall for it i think youre makin a big mistake remember when it does i told you so!
2007-03-08 15:24:21 · answer #6 · answered by darlolad2000 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
SOMEBODY GIVE ME SUM TISSUES!!!!!!!
2007-03-08 15:18:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
YES!!!!!!!!!!! ITS GREAT!!! GO FOR IT!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-08 15:18:34 · answer #8 · answered by rosa 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋