Title: Break-ups
A tear starts to break,
The feeling is strange,
But now he thinks it's time for a change.
My soul is so deep,
Am I way too cheap?
Is this the way I want it to keep?
The rain falls down,
With an unhappy frown,
This all seems to real,
I feel like I wanna drown.
Why does it have to end this way? She says
No answer, Not even a trace.
Hard to let go,
Hard to forget,
Had to move fast,
Hard to break stress.
2007-03-07 11:29:22 · 6 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
OK, but kind of Dr. Seuss'ish :(
2007-03-07 11:32:47 · answer #1 · answered by Life after 45 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good! But the rythm threw me off some, and the rhyming scheme. I like it when either the whole thing rhymes or none of it.
2007-03-07 19:33:51 · answer #2 · answered by :::Christina:::: 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2007-03-07 19:33:27 · answer #3 · answered by tweed801 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love it but why would u want to drown??...
2007-03-07 19:32:02 · answer #4 · answered by me 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good!
2007-03-07 19:31:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really good!!!
2007-03-07 19:32:42 · answer #6 · answered by ~*~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋