i need some good love poems to give a girl, i've been goin out with her for a couple weeks and i really love her
2007-03-07 11:12:47 · 18 answers · asked by drummer boy 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Here's a love poem I wrote:
The Lover
My dearest, my only inspiration for all that I do;
How, in all pure truth, do I explain my love to you?
All but a dim flame;
But a blazing fire that resisted the water of the sea
A group, ever so gay, or a wild game
Or passion that burned for eternity?
I would claim my love summer rain
Though it sounds so weak, all but sane
Or was it the stars, glued against the sky of midnight,
Sparkling in the twilight?
O, grace, how do I do this, truthfully so?
Honestly, I do not know!
O, God, have I failed indeed?
Let my love be known to the lover I have treasured for so long
That my love is immeasurable, and unexplainably strong!
My dearest, my only inspiration for all that I do;
How, in all pure truth, do I explain my love to you?
All but a dim flame;
But a blazing fire that resisted the water of the sea
A group, ever so gay, or a wild game
Or passion that burned for eternity?
Hope this helps!
2007-03-07 11:15:11 · answer #1 · answered by Shauna 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
An Endless Night
The sky, an endless ocean
The World is dipped in dew
This night would have no end
If eternity was you.
The stars are little diamonds
Floating in a black sea
There is nothing else
When you are here with me.
The clouds are cotton pillows
As soft as your velvet skin
I lay next to you forever
Your soul calls me from within.
The grass,a soft carpet,
Laid out for you and me
This night is ours forever
Forever it will be.
I wrote this a long time ago.
2007-03-07 19:28:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I went looking through all the poems I wrote last semester for my Creative Writing class, 'cause I had written one about love, but it was about a love falling apart. Sorry.
2007-03-07 19:17:16 · answer #3 · answered by ladyeilwynn 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Then write one.
If it's love and it comes from you, it's priceless. Makes no difference whether or not it's good.
If it comes from a book or some web site - that's not love, just plagiarism and why bother?
Love means trusting - trust her to see your message, and your heart, whether your words are brilliant or pedestrian.
2007-03-07 19:16:33 · answer #4 · answered by Uncle John 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
lovepoemsandquotes.com
I love this site!
I used it to make a Valentine Card for my boyfriend with a cute poem :]
2007-03-07 19:16:13 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I agree with #1. Do it from your heart. Girls love that. Even if it sucks it just means your adorable.Try it!
2007-03-07 19:17:22 · answer #6 · answered by The Random Blonde 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
write a poem from your feelings that you feel its pretty easy once you write all your feelings down then put them together. best of luck.
2007-03-07 19:16:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
plenty on this site...http://www.poetry.com
Love is Sweet
As birds that tweet
I love you so much
I want to feel your touch
2007-03-07 19:17:42 · answer #8 · answered by sunflare63 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Write one from your heart!
2007-03-07 19:14:53 · answer #9 · answered by Rewind 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
write 1 by yourself. those r the sweetest and will make her swoon
2007-03-07 19:16:38 · answer #10 · answered by BB 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋