Can Someone Rate My Own "Translation"?

Question

Que numero de celular era, me has dejado curiosa?

D**** ya sabe que estas molesto porque no entra la llamada, y ella no sabe aun que hacer para solucionarlo.

Ten paciencia, no te enojes, espero pronto me llegue su email dirigido a ti y se solucione el impase.

Okay WITHOUT using an online translator, My understanding of this message in MY OWN words, is as follows:

What cellular number? I am curious.

D**** already knows that you are annoyed that every time you call, it will not connect, but doesn't know how to solve the problem.

Be patient. Do not get angry. The E-mail has already been forwarded to her so hopefully this will solve the problem.

Well, how well did I do? Can you correct me if I'm wrong? Thanks.

Answer 1

Very good, witheld!
You understood the first part perfectly.

The last part has some differences:
Be patient. Do not get angry. I hope I will soon receive her email addressed to you and the problem will be solved.

(She will forward the email from D. to you).

Good luck!

Answer 2

for "you are annoyed that every time you call it will not connect"

I would put

que te enojas de que no entre la llamada (it really means you get mad but molesto means annoying)

also i would put, for "the email has already been forwarded...

"El email ya ha sido dirigido a ella por eso con optimismo así se solucione el problema(el impase, whatever)"

well I don't know, you had a really good translation (kudos for not using those online translators they just F everything up). I tend to not always be exact-matching in my translations but.. er..

good job :)

oh sorry ps. this seems like it's a communication between a company rep (tech support?) and a customer or something so could you use Usted instead of tú?

Answer 3

¿Qué número de celular era? Quiero saber (it gives the idea that she/he is curious)
D*** ya sabe que estás molesto porque cada vez que llamas no entra la llamada pero ella no sabe qué hacer para solucionar el inconveniente/ problema or just solucionarlo (as you wrote)
Ten paciencia, no te enojes. Ya se le ha reenviado el e-mail así que con suerte se solucionará (el problema)

Pretty well! I've just made some corrections but it's ok.
Good luck!