Im the type of dude that will never do u wrong,
Girl for real i don't wanna be alone,
It feels so good when we textin on the phone,
I'll never be the type that will up an roam,
Never for some *** break up our happy home,
But girls there some feelings u keep on your dome,
So jus let em out and see what this can be,
Cuz u in my life is all that i need,
But sometimes its so hard for u to believe,
I know love is blind but i wish u could see,
Ur the one for me im the one for u,
Cuz everything i do is all for u,
So let me jus spit these bars to u,
My boo is wut i wanna be callin u,
So if wanna dude that will always be near,
U don't have to look anymore im right here
2007-03-05 11:07:24 · 9 answers · asked by Ya Boy 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
poem.. awwww that's so sweet.. my boyfriend wrote a song for me .. with his band ... it made me cry ... but this is awesome
2007-03-05 11:12:14 · answer #1 · answered by (10% Him) (5% Me) (85% Love) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go to http://www.poetry.com/ and enter the contest. If you win the contest, you get alot of money. They will even publish it. They also put it on the poetry.com to get votes and to let everyone see your poem.
When they publish it, you can buy the book with your poem in it and you can buy a slip cover.
2007-03-05 11:17:02 · answer #2 · answered by layanne1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg that was so sweet i cant belive it u made me cry a lil bit u are an amizing writter dont misss ur chance do sumin wit ur talkent gd luck
2007-03-05 11:11:43 · answer #3 · answered by idkjustanothergurl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds as though you had to make words to fit, but on the whole... pretty good.
2007-03-05 11:14:01 · answer #4 · answered by beebee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
man you are great writer do u got any more of this
i am jealous of the girl that will have u
2007-03-05 11:14:13 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so increadibly sweet....
I really like it
It will give her something to think about...
Good Job.,
2007-03-05 11:11:32 · answer #6 · answered by circusgirl322 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's definitely more rap material but it's beautiful keep writing you have some talent boy.
2007-03-05 11:12:36 · answer #7 · answered by sweetsmiles69@jennieask-me 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's sweet ... you should give it to who ever you wrote it for
2007-03-05 11:11:59 · answer #8 · answered by Like Nothing Else 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awww cute ;)
2007-03-05 11:10:21 · answer #9 · answered by <3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋