How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart
I hope this get's the attention of the right girl so she will contact me too
2007-03-05 06:26:45 · 6 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
the only thing in this poem I don't understand is the "our" part...
My unswaying....
I'll hold.....
My heart....
hope she calls you anyway...
2007-03-05 06:32:34 · answer #1 · answered by freebird31wizard 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kinda putting a woman on a pedestal. What about the man? It goes without saying that the woman would treat the man like this too..... right?
2007-03-05 14:32:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this isn't poetry hour you sad sack. women are atracted to the poetic measly type but they never stick. stop being a loser and act like a man.
2007-03-05 14:31:12 · answer #3 · answered by nightmare_gorilla 2 · 0⤊ 3⤋
nice peom
2007-03-07 14:55:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...thats very beautiful......it seems like maybe you are trying really really hard......have you had your heart broken?
2007-03-05 14:34:08 · answer #5 · answered by ambitious_highschooler 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm not sure what it is exactly i'm reading
2007-03-05 14:32:16 · answer #6 · answered by Faerie Girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋