ok i have written a song/ poem..tell me how you like it.. thanks!
you know whats weird in life, you see
things always come full circle, finally
we walk in circles or walk in squares
might walk together, though no one really cares
you play this game, like she played with you
I ll play it till I’m in love with you
we might pass each other every single day
but I wont find the right words, for me to say
to tell you what every morning is like
and what I feel every single night
when unwanted tears fill my eyes
remind me of this beautiful paradise
where things are only what they seem to be
where two people are happy till eternity
I can be with a guy who’ll love me too
you wouldn’t have happened, I won’t even know you
but things aren’t what they seem to be
and a new story begins with he & she
may be love will happen once again
but wont be lost in the mist of rain
life will go on, life will be nice
may be I’ll see you soon, in some other disguise
but you know what’s weird in life, you see
things always come full circle, finally
2007-03-05 04:47:26 · 5 answers · asked by cranberries 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
your poem is so nice..each word in it is so poerful wiz deep meaning not all people can understand it...go gulr..keep ze great work..
2007-03-05 04:57:10 · answer #1 · answered by simply me 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As a guitarist I know from first hand that the words are the hardest to come up with. The music is the easiest for me. You are talented. The words is what make the song if it wasn't for words it wouldn't be music.
2007-03-05 15:03:29 · answer #2 · answered by Bandit 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thanks for your poem. Everyone is seeking for true love and understanding. Only Jesus Christ loves us just like we are and is willing to help us grow in love. It may not be till we're in paradise (heaven) that we will finally know and have true love that lasts forever!
2007-03-05 12:57:17 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is great you go girl...loved it a lot......ok
2007-03-05 14:55:32 · answer #4 · answered by William E A 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are very talented. I like it =]
2007-03-05 12:53:26 · answer #5 · answered by Odessa Fraser 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋