"" The short term- goal, that I hope to accomplish at Howard University, is to get accepted into the physician assistant program."""
2007-03-04 08:08:03 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
My short term goal is to get accepted into the Physician Assisant program at Howard University.
2007-03-04 08:28:41 · answer #1 · answered by mystical_me77 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The short-term goal that I hope to accomplish at Howard University is to get accepted into its physician assistant program.
2007-03-04 16:35:40 · answer #2 · answered by ♡♥ sHaNu ♥♡ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Being accepted into the physician assistant program at Howard University is a short-term goal I hope to achieve.
2007-03-04 16:13:00 · answer #3 · answered by Moxie Crimefighter 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The short-term goal I hope to achieve at Howard University is to be accepted into the physician assistant program.
2007-03-04 16:12:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This sentence isn't all that bad currently, just slightly confusing due to too many short clauses. A possible revision:
My short-term goal is to be accepted into the physician assistant program at Howard University.
Hope this helps you -- good luck on accomplishing your goal!!! :D
2007-03-04 16:17:50 · answer #5 · answered by piecrumz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would replace 'that' with 'which.'
I would take out the unnecessary commas.
I would replace 'get' with 'be.'
Is the 'physician assistant' term usually capitalized?
The new, cleaner sentence would read:
"The short-term goal which I hope to accomplish at Howard University is to be accepted into the physician assistant program."
2007-03-04 16:15:34 · answer #6 · answered by pasdeberet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My short term goal is to get accepted into the physician assistant program at Howard University.
One of my short term goals is to get accepted into the physician assistant program.
Simplicity is best. Doesn't need to be long. Avoid commas when you can.
My goal for tonight is to attend a kegger.
2007-03-04 16:14:32 · answer #7 · answered by 47 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
you need to decide if you are going for a first person perspective like "My goal is to be accepted to Howard's physician assistant program"
or use the third person perspective, "The short term goal is to be accepted to the phyicians assistant program at Howard University"
you cant switch back and forth or it gets confusing.
2007-03-04 16:17:28 · answer #8 · answered by rachael 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My short term goal is to gain admittance to the Physician Assistant programme at Howard University.
"that I hope"!!!!! dear me no. "which I hope"
2007-03-04 16:12:23 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no comma's at all
2007-03-04 16:12:36 · answer #10 · answered by gir 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋