this is the first part of my story i have to write so i was just wondering if it made sense, right tense, spelling, use of words, and stuff like that.
also if should be with passe compose and imparfait
thanks!!
David était un gentil jeune garçon. Il a les cheveux bruns et les yeux bruns. Il était intelligent et a aimé le football. Un jour, il a joué au football avec ses amis. Ils ont perdu la boule dans la forêt. David est allé le trouver.
2007-03-03 12:35:47 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Pretty sure this is how it goes:
David était un gentil jeune garçon. Il avait les cheveux bruns et les yeux bruns. Il était intelligent et aimait le football. Un jour, il a joué au football avec ses amis. Ils ont perdu la boule dans la forêt. David est allé la trouver.
2007-03-03 13:35:59 · answer #1 · answered by Josh 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Put everything before "Un jour" in present tense and everything after that in Imparfait.
David est un jeune garcon gentil.Il a les cheveux bruns et les yeux bruns.Il est intelligent et il aime le football.Un jour, il jouait au football avec ses amis.Ils perdait le ballon dans la forêt et David allait le retrouver.
I guess you haven't had the Imparfait tense yet, so nobody can blame you for this, and your teacher probably wouldn't either.And apart from the tenses and the use of boule (Boule is more a bowling ball, a football is ballon) everything is perfect, chapeau!
2007-03-03 12:59:26 · answer #2 · answered by eelliko 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. "etait" is past, but "a" is present, "a aimee" is past perfect. The next two sentences should be past imperfect (l'imparfait), not the past perfect.. The last sentence is in the present, passive voice. In other words, a mess.
2007-03-03 12:50:31 · answer #3 · answered by thylawyer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good...i like it
2007-03-03 12:54:36 · answer #4 · answered by Shmily P 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋