is this the right french tense?

Question

this is the first part of my story i have to write so i was just wondering if it made sense, right tense, spelling, use of words, and stuff like that.
also if should be with passe compose and imparfait
thanks!!

sorry, forgot the most important part
David était un gentil jeune garçon. Il a les cheveux bruns et les yeux bruns. Il était intelligent et a aimé le football. Un jour, il a joué au football avec ses amis. Ils ont perdu la boule dans la forêt. David est allé le trouver.

Answer 1

Here are some changes to make this passage grammatically correct:
"David était un gentil petit garçon. Il avait les cheveux bruns et les yeux marrons. Il était intelligent et aimait le football. Un jour, alors qu'il jouait au football avec ses amis, ils perdirent la boule dans la forêt. David alla la chercher."
(Native speaker with an English/French translation background)
The thing to remember is that imparfait and passé simple often go hand in hand, however you can't mix those 2 tenses with passé composé, which is mostly used on its own.

Answer 2

what's the first part?

Answer 3

Already answered this... See the other question

Answer 4

Please write out the first part so we can check it.