"" Being inspired to help my grandfather, who became blind during my early teen ages, it never took me that long to identify my life goal as becoming a medical doctor. """"
2007-03-03 10:30:17 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I think it would sound better this way:
" Being inspired to help my grandfather, who became blind during my early teens (or "my early teen years"), it didn't take me long to identify my life goal; becoming a physician. "
2007-03-03 10:40:00 · answer #1 · answered by JAT 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Being inspired to help my grandfather, who became blind during my early teen ages, it never took me that long to identify my life goal OF becoming a medical doctor.
2007-03-03 18:52:20 · answer #2 · answered by lizzle sizzle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When my grandfather became blind when I was still in my teens, it didn't take me long to identify that i wanted to become a medical doctor!
2007-03-03 18:39:21 · answer #3 · answered by iluvshrks5720 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because my grandfather became blind while I was still in my teens,it inspired me to become a medical doctor.
2007-03-03 18:37:21 · answer #4 · answered by heather h 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I realized that my life goal was to become a doctor in my early teen years when my grandfather lost his sight.
2007-03-03 18:42:37 · answer #5 · answered by Jessie Jo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The decision to become a medical doctor was the result of wanting to help my grandfather who, during my teenage years, fell victim to blindness.
2007-03-03 18:38:30 · answer #6 · answered by VW 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My grandfather, who became blind while I was in my teens, inspired my desire to help others.That is when I realized my life's goal was to become a medical doctor.
2007-03-03 18:37:42 · answer #7 · answered by bigd0gindah20 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"Having been devoted to helping my grandfather, who became blind during my early teens, it was a natural progression to identifying my life goal as to qualify as a doctor."
"Medical doctor" is unnecessary. "Doctor" conveys the message quite adequately.
2007-03-03 18:36:43 · answer #8 · answered by Doethineb 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I was inspired in my teen age years by the blindness that overtook my Grandfather.All I wanted to do was help him.That's when I decided to make a medical career my goal in life.To help people as a Doctor is my mission in life.
2007-03-03 18:39:59 · answer #9 · answered by AngelsFan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"my early teen years" would be better. Also "my life goal of being a medical doctor" would be less clumsy.
2007-03-03 18:39:09 · answer #10 · answered by supertop 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋