every time i think of you i get so happy... i get all tingly inside and smile
for no reason....i think about the way we used to laugh in class and get in
trouble... the way the teacher would get all madd and start yelling and all we
could do was look at eachother and laugh some more..... those were the days that
made me love you so much....just being next to you ............so now.....i
think about you all the time and everytime i think about the good times we had
together.....i just love you more........but then i
remember....................you love...................her.................
[tell what you think of this one ]
if you want more let me know .....i have a lot
2007-03-03 05:56:36 · 10 answers · asked by BrOwN eYe'D cHiCa 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
P-O-E-T i told you lol muahh u know i love you =]
2007-03-03 14:37:14 · answer #1 · answered by mee_shell 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If he loves someone else then try to get over him. Find other ways to occupy your time. Eventually you will forget how much you thought you had to have him! If you have to try to make someone love you, then why would you want to be with them, ya know? It is either there or it isn't
2007-03-03 14:01:57 · answer #2 · answered by erin 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats Good!! You r a good poet. It gets straight down to the point and into the heart!! Very good!
2007-03-03 14:13:00 · answer #3 · answered by Shelby N 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aaaaaaaaaawww. Keep speaking from the heart ,girl.
2007-03-03 14:01:29 · answer #4 · answered by Xena_fire 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that is good-- Kind of describes my life-- In love with someone who loves another. It is a mess.
2007-03-03 14:00:39 · answer #5 · answered by Sarah D 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good one. But I think it would be better if you could shorten it somehow. Use less words and allow your readers to imagine and identify their own situation. Good luck.
2007-03-03 14:05:38 · answer #6 · answered by thinbrownline 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
Keep up the good work.
And keep writing from Your heart.
2007-03-03 14:04:30 · answer #7 · answered by Backhoe 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it , that's real touching , chica
2007-03-03 14:03:13 · answer #8 · answered by cathy s 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good put more up here
2007-03-03 14:02:37 · answer #9 · answered by Wendy C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GOD!! I hate people who think they can write poetry. AND this isn't poetry... It's DRIVEL!!
2007-03-03 14:04:26 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋