1. She looked at him and said,"I don't believe you."
2. "I don't believe," said Anna.
The above re-writes are correct...
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ALSO the comma is before the " maarks when using a speech tag
He said, "Hi there!"
"Hi there," he exclaimed!
2007-03-02 21:10:05
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answered by admiredi 4
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First of all, use spell check. It is so easy and available. I don't understand why there are so many misspelled questions and answers.
1. She looked at him and said, "I don't believe you."
(Comma after said, spell believe correctly, and note that the quote comes after a period which you eliminated.)
2. "I don't believe you," said Anna.
(Spell believe correctly, add you after believe, comma after you, do not capitalize said.)
Remember the rule, "i before e, except after c." Example:
believe.....receive
Good luck.
2007-03-03 05:47:58
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answer #2
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answered by NeNe 3
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The first one is correct, and no comma is needed.
You need a comma between "believe" and said. But you need an object in the second sentence though.
2007-03-03 06:55:43
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answer #3
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answered by danielle s 2
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1. She looked at him and said, "I don't believe you."
2. "I don't believe," said Anna.
Those are correct.
2007-03-03 19:14:49
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answer #4
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answered by zaytox0724 5
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I think both statements are slightly incorrect. They should be:
1. She looked at him and said, "I don't believe you."
2. "I don't believe you", said Anna.
2007-03-03 05:20:04
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answer #5
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answered by alhinai 1
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1) She looked at him and said "i don't believe you".
2) "I don't believe you", said Anna.
2007-03-03 05:21:57
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answer #6
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answered by sydneygal 6
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Weird that this got so many answers.
You want the one right above mine -- Joy's, I think.
2007-03-03 06:17:13
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answered by Anonymous
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She looked at him and said, "i don't believe you".
"I don't believe". Said Anna.
2007-03-03 05:12:47
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answered by Anonymous
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She looked at him and said, "I don't believe you."
"I don't believe you", said Anna.
2007-03-03 05:10:39
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answer #9
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answered by indithral11 2
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SuzieQ and Josh are correct!!
How's that for lazy?
2007-03-03 05:17:45
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answer #10
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answered by curious 2
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