Ok i just wrote another poem and i need some opinions on it.What does it say to you,is it good? And btw Amuses is a word haha
Trying to figure out why you lied
Please stop with the excuses
Long enough i've had to abide
Do i have that many amuses?
I'm such a loser for believing you
Changing without consent
Will you ever be true?
You've Broken me to a greater extent
2007-03-02 08:53:07 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
A persons feelings are always good. You have the rhyming in there. I enjoyed it. To me you sound very hurt by someone and someone has broken your trust. Don't ley it build up to long.
2007-03-02 08:58:59 · answer #1 · answered by molsoncanadiangirl101 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like you had a horrible break up.
Try not to be so angsty about it..most likely you are young, and you will have a lot of experiences..some good...some bad. you should really think of dating as a game...that is what has gotten me through break up after break up all these years.
2007-03-02 16:57:15 · answer #2 · answered by Bevin M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem, but why would you let some-one bring you down like that? Life is too short to play games. No-one is a loser, if she is bringing your self esteem down like that then you don't need her.
2007-03-02 16:58:59 · answer #3 · answered by bdgizzy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice work man.
Two Thumbs Up
2007-03-02 16:56:59 · answer #4 · answered by The Zunester 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry friend-----it's back to the drawing board on this one.
We are not amused.
2007-03-02 17:00:44 · answer #5 · answered by EZMZ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job buddy
2007-03-02 16:56:22 · answer #6 · answered by Tiger by the Tail 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
uhm. yeah. its okay. but keep trying!
2007-03-02 16:57:43 · answer #7 · answered by whoahcalleex0 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very very very very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-02 16:57:00 · answer #8 · answered by D 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋