I feel your body close to mine
I hear your breath and mine in time
I know I'm nothing but it's you that I need
I touch your skin and it starts to feed
My eyes meet yours in secret glance
our bodies locked in ancient stance
you whisper something and I
know it's good
you're acting crazy just like I
knew you would
Embracing my life between your thigh
we will preform in the deadly skies
reducing my mind to endless nights
you send my derams to there demise
realized by your last breath
I take your hair into my hands
I pull it tight to fill your demands
feed my body into yours
know it's right cause that's
my soul you stir!!
2007-03-01 05:03:10 · 14 answers · asked by Sir Hard & Thick 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
When people talk about sex it's just the act,but your poem is passionate and mature.You really took the time to capture the essence of making love,this poem is very sensual and exotic.Good job
2007-03-01 05:12:04 · answer #1 · answered by TRUTH 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
absolutely SPEECHLESS..
~beautiful~
ur very good!!
did u write it?
coze I write poetry myself..
My sweet’s embrace grabs hold
of something deep within my soul.
His magic touch soothes my heart
and fills an empty hole.
My sweet’s kisses are so soft and gentle,
more exquisite than fine wine.
His slender fingers course through my hair,
sending shivers down my spine.
2007-03-01 13:17:25 · answer #2 · answered by Gõlden angel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice (; but the last line needs some work, it didnt flow like the rest of the poem.
2007-03-01 13:09:44 · answer #3 · answered by CRAZY 8 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a sweet poem. Keep them coming!
2007-03-01 13:06:50 · answer #4 · answered by capechic13 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, pulling hair...I like it.....only when my husband does it though! Very sensual poem!
2007-03-02 06:15:05 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you really need to get out and get laid. Your writing about it. Especially with a name like that, go do it man. Get some, or alot.
2007-03-01 13:09:07 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
very imaginative!! mayb il *** over n u can give it 2 me in person lol
2007-03-01 13:07:42 · answer #7 · answered by minxi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was good and kind of disturbing but HOT
2007-03-01 13:08:33 · answer #8 · answered by devon a 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like that... seriously... thats pretty good...
2007-03-01 13:11:09 · answer #9 · answered by misspookett 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Sir thick and hard"--- very juvenile. Even you name is juvenile, grow up buddy!
2007-03-01 13:07:46 · answer #10 · answered by Wisdom??? 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋