Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.
You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.
My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.
Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.
Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.
2007-03-01 01:37:08 · 14 answers · asked by ♥live life to the fullest♥ 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
One of the best I have read for a long time !!...five stars to you, copyright it and get it printed before someone else does....good luck, keep up the writing, you will be famous soon......
2007-03-01 01:42:41 · answer #1 · answered by ozzy chik... 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
U have some talent. Awesome poem!
2007-03-01 09:48:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely beautiful. I love it!
2007-03-01 09:41:53 · answer #3 · answered by bina64davis 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2007-03-01 09:40:28 · answer #4 · answered by Dan821 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad at all. are these ur own words or u took some somewhere else?
2007-03-01 10:04:47 · answer #5 · answered by ivelisse 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's BEAUTIFUL...and very sweet if a guy wrote that for me i would probably cry!!!!!
2007-03-01 09:40:39 · answer #6 · answered by HelpMe123 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really nice... Did you write it? If yes, i think you have a talent...
2007-03-01 09:40:27 · answer #7 · answered by :( 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a beautiful poem
2007-03-01 09:41:00 · answer #8 · answered by sweetpea25609 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its beautiful. why dont u publish it?
2007-03-01 09:40:52 · answer #9 · answered by ravi c 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it.
2007-03-01 09:43:14 · answer #10 · answered by richard 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋