would this be better?

Question

ok for v-day a few weeks ago...i gave this girl a hand made card...but she doesnt seem too interested ...or maybe shes just shy but anyways i wanna make friends with her instead cause i dont want her to feel uncomfortable around me so...i wan to tell her that....umm..i think we start off the wrong foot...i knew the card was a dumb idea but at least now u know how i feel...anyways i want to get to know u cause u seem like a fasinating person ...so wanna be friends....heres my email ....blah blah "?

Answer 1

You might be better off moving on; find another girl who you find interesting.