Is this poem any good?

Question

I come from the suburbs, rich people still ain’t happy
We all get home at odd hours with no time to talk
Pop the dinner in the microwave and let the TV fill the silence
Nothing to say to one another its like I don’t have a brother
Rapped up in our own problems forgotten the meaning of life
Gota get the BMW with the V8
They were never there, when I needed them
Daddy bought me the nicest glove money could by
But never taught me how to catch a pop fly
Standing alone in the yard
Trying to play catch by yourself is hard
Material goods have taken over the place in our hearts that used to be filled
By moms good cooking, a hug before bed and maybe a story
That’s the glory I missed
Shiny metal and big TV’s
Is more important than fixing the young’s scrapped knees
Where did we go wrong???

Answer 1

It would more correctly be called a "prose"

It is a disturbingly true story of a great many of todays youth.

I like it even though it is sad, because it brings to light a burgeoning situation in society.

Well done......

Answer 2

you have a story. try to re-structure your lines and consider the rhythm that a poem must possess.

Answer 3

sooo true and soo sad...
but good writing... the style almost sounds like a rap song.

Answer 4

i love it

Answer 5

okAY not that good

Answer 6

it's just boring...