im doing an essay of my favorite actor, can you please edit this?
2007-02-27 11:10:42 · 2 answers · asked by Sam 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Rey Zav, born June 8, 1988, in Caracas, is a Venezuelan actor, best known for playing Alirio Bejarano in the popular Venezuelan soap opera, Amantes.
Zav was born in Caracas to Reinaldo Peche, who is an Engineer, and Maria Laura, who works in Internationalism. They do not have anything to do with artistic means.
Zav first started his career appearing in several TV commercials including Movilnet, EFE, Polar Maltín, Discovery Channel, Pepsi, and Chupi Plum. With his good looks and charming personality, his agent convinced him to try acting.
In 2005, Zav landed the role of Alirio Bejarano in the popular TV series Amantes. This then followed by another TV appearance the following year, on "Te tengo en salsa" playing the part Diego Sanchez.
If Zav could describe himself in three words, he said "sportsman, creative and wild!"
Zav is an avid soccer fan. He loves anything to do with sports and fitness.
2007-02-27 11:11:56 · update #1
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At a very young age, he has already a well-developed and aesthetically pleasing physique.
During his spare time, Zav loves to play the guitar, sing and go to the beach every day to master his new hobby: Surfing.
His ultimate dream is to someday go to Hollywood and become a successful actor. He's said that if he weren’t an actor, he would be a lawyer or a soccer player. "I'm still young. The whole world of possibilities is still ahead of me. Who knows? I could an actor, a lawyer and a soccer player or even a pro-surfer at the same time," Zav has said enthusiastically.
2007-02-27 11:12:51 · update #2
Really a great job. About 10 minor errors I corrected in the text below.
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Rey Zav, born June 8, 1988, in Caracas, is a Venezuelan actor, best known for playing Alirio Bejarano in the popular Venezuelan soap opera, Amantes.
Zav was born in Caracas to Reinaldo Peche, who is an engineer, and Maria Laura, who works in international affairs. Neither has anything to do with the arts.
Zav first started his career appearing in several TV commercials including Movilnet, EFE, Polar Maltín, Discovery Channel, Pepsi, and Chupi Plum. Since he has good looks and a charming personality, his agent convinced him to try acting.
In 2005, Zav landed the role of Alirio Bejarano in the popular TV series Amantes. This was then followed by another TV appearance the following year, on "Te tengo en salsa" playing the part of Diego Sanchez.
If Zav could describe himself in three words, he would say "sportsman, creative and wild!"
Zav is an avid soccer fan. He loves everything having to do with sports and fitness.
At a very young age, he already has a well-developed and aesthetically pleasing physique.
During his spare time, Zav loves to play the guitar, sing and go to the beach every day to master his new hobby, surfing.
His ultimate dream is to someday go to Hollywood and become a successful actor. He's said that if he weren’t an actor, he would be a lawyer or a soccer player. "I'm still young. A whole world of possibilities is still ahead of me. Who knows? I could become an actor, a lawyer and a soccer player, or even a pro-surfer at the same time," Zav said enthusiastically.
2007-02-27 12:44:02 · answer #1 · answered by JP 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to me it looks ok you do not need to change anything
2007-02-27 19:21:56 · answer #2 · answered by PrincessC 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋